Under The Full Bright Moon

Without being disrespectful, I think its fine in various aspects but it needs fixes in some stuff as a lot of people say, but about the speed, well, I can say that visual novels are slower than the average story because they can use more time telling stuff than comics, Tv Shows and Animated Series, given the ability of showing more with less resources, and also, that the player can read it calmly or extremely fast but looking at the pictures, I can recomend that it should take its time to move and just describe more the stuff, like, more dialogue, and maybe longer descriptions because the dialogues dont need an entire drawing to have the characters talking

Also, the characters are bigger than they should, I recomend making them X1.25 or X1.5 the size of a human being, because in real life its probable that a lot of them would not be taller than 2.72 meters (Higher recorded in human history [AKA: Extremely Rare])

Also... MC's Name is weird, Who calls someone like that in this world?
In fantasy is posible, but not in our Normal Land [xl]

Don't want to sound mean or harsh, but the demo has left a very bad impression on me. 

* An incrediby generic premise (a modern day teenager isekaied to yet another fantasy world to meet a wolf himbo);

* An incredibly hamfisted dialog (characters say exactly what they want which comes acrosss overly direct, lacking nuance and realism --- real people don't talk like that); 

* an incredibly rushed pacing (it takes only ten diologue boxes for protagonist to lament about his life for a bit, then to get isekaied, then to meet the wolf himbo without even giving a reader a time to process what the hell has even happened) 

* and the demo wasn't even tested properly as selecting literally any other option then "new game" is getting me a classic Ren'Py error message "an exception has occured". 

Even the artstyle (which is the only good part) has its issues: all wolfs look way too buff and protagonist somehow already looks like a medieval noble rather then modern day teenager.

I hope it will improve later but so far the entire demo looks incredibly amateurish so far as to come really close of being yet another Ren'Py asset flip.

Hello id like to provide some feedback could you possibly try making the texts larger and also be able change the color its because its hard to see and read the text and i literally have to bring the phone closer to my face to read it,anyways great VN hope there will be more ❤️

Hey there, I'd like to provide some feedback. I've been intrigued by the looks of this game since I first heard about it on Twitter, but I'm sad to say that I found it quite disappointing. I understand it's just a demo, and that's why I'm trying to offer honest feedback/criticism without sounding rude. 

The first thing that I notice when opening the game is that it defaults to fullscreen, and the main menu music (and all music in general) seems to be really quiet. I really love the title screen and UI design, the transitions between menus feel a little bit long, but apart from that I think it looks great and fits well with the theme. 

When it came to starting the game however, the writing is where everything falls apart. Just reading the very first message, I had to re-read it a few times to make any sense of it. I continued on thinking that there was going to be more of an explanation about it, but there wasn't. Instead, it jumps straight into the main character seemingly about to commit suicide, without any warning or transitional writing. The first message could have very well been expanded upon, while keeping the same effect of a mysterious hook to a story, since it's the most important part of grabbing the reader's attention.

Moving on to the setup of the story, you quickly realize that the writing feels so rushed and rough. So much so, that it's hard to keep track of what's happening as it lacks any kind of explanation in the writing. Thing after thing constantly keeps happening at the start, with no details in the writing that help the reader not feel so overwhelmed.

Directly after waking up in the cabin, that's where the story started losing me, and I somewhat stopped paying attention because of how confused I was getting. As I said previously, I feel the writing just lacks detail as it just doesn't flow well and it seems to stay that way throughout the whole game. I kept constantly asking questions about the events that were happening before me. By the way, pressing esc to pause and ctrl to skip just doesn't work, forcing you to use the UI buttons.

When it comes to the character's dialogue, it felt completely out of place when the main character was just plain rude. None of the jokes seemed to stick, and the sound effects with the dialogue were very out of place for the atmosphere. There were some parts of the text that would continue on out of nowhere without the user's input, not letting the reader read it. I also noticed that one of the background songs suddenly cuts off in the same spot every time and just restarts. The second wolf's name does not get introduced and only gets revealed suddenly. Not to mention the slapping from him coming straight out of nowhere, making him also seem just plain rude. Then the CG also just randomly appears and doesn't transition well, making it feel out of place (But I think the same goes for the rest of them)

I would continue on, but after the coin-flipping CG I really stopped trying to read into it I'm afraid. I glossed over the rest of the text from there and it seemed to still lack everything I already talked about. I was really looking forward to this game's release but I'm sad to say it didn't deliver. However just because the writing really lacks, doesn't mean the rest of the game (Art, design, story premise, all that stuff) doesn't have great potential. At least that's what I think, that everything else has great potential, and that's why I'm writing this. I hope this helps.

No this is not happening... An Werewolf VN with muscles and guts?! I think I am having a werewolf awakening crisis or some shit that I keep fawning for wolf-like creatures as of recently this year and this VN wont help my addiction at all! I think I am on the edge of just breaking into obsession... I don't want to go out like that, I must resist... YOU WEREWOLF LOVERS WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME AHAHAHA!

I played it. I think it's over for me. Especially the last CG scene of this Demo that you fuckers did got me and nearly jumped out of my seat... I'll be looking forward for this project!

Having font color option or make it different contrast color with background would be nice 😅

love it! great art style, and story is good so far(even if just a demon now). excited for updates on it! what does the update schedule look like for this vn?

Hi, any news on when the game will be released ?

same hope  its better than  the monster vilage